短文改错
高考考试短文改错题是在给出一篇约100词的短文,文中有10处错误,需要考生对每一个句子进行判断,如有错误将它改正。错误种类包含词法、句法、行文逻辑等方面的错误。每句中最多有两处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
高考考试短文改错着重考查考生的语言基本功和正确用英语进行表达的能力。此题型不只需要考生结实的学会肯定的词语和语法常识,还需要考生具备肯定的阅读理解和逻辑推理能力。它针对考生平常学英语过程中,特别是在写作中常犯的错误而设计的,考生在平常写作中常出现的错误是短文改错考查的重点。
【考试试题特征】
通常来讲,短文改错的语言材料一般来自学考试生文章或像考生习作的文章。所选材料篇幅较短,约100词左右,10—12个句子;困难程度不大,基本上无生僻的词语和语法结构。短文改错的话题较容易见到,一般是叙述一个事情或说明一个事物。从体裁上看,历年高考考试考试试题中的短文改错以记叙文和应用文为主,兼顾说明文和议论文。一般从词法,句法和行文逻辑三个角度设题,错误种类有多词,缺词,和错词三种,比率一般为错词:多词:缺词=8(7):1(2):1
短文改错:近三年的对比剖析
2016—2019年英语新课标全国卷短文改错考向双向细目表
年份 | 试题种类 | 体裁 | 词数 | 考试知识点分布 |
2019年 | 新课标卷I | 记叙文 | 95 | 形容词;定语从句;冠词;连词;副词; 固定搭配;名词的数; 目前分词; 固定搭配; 固定搭配 |
新课标卷II | 记叙文 | 105 | 名词的数;形容词的使用方法;序数词; 副词;介词;连词;there be句型 形容词;形容词比较级;一般过去时 | |
新课标卷III | 说明文 | 108 | 不定式;动词的时态;形容词 固定搭配;介词;代词;定语从句 动词的固定搭配;名词的数;冠词 | |
2018年 | 新课标卷I | 记叙文 | 113 | 冠词;动词时态;不定代词;副词;名词复数 定语从句;非谓语动词;形容词;介词;连词 |
新课标卷II | 记叙文 | 108 | 名词;名词单复数;冠词;非谓语动词 情态动词;代词;固定搭配;介词;时态 宾语从句的连接词 | |
新课标卷III | 记叙文 | 102 | 时态;非谓语动词;连词;固定搭配;代词;固定结构;比较级;主谓一致;副词 | |
2017年 | 新课标卷I | 记叙文 | 114 | 数词;冠词;连词;时态;单复数;非谓语动词;固定句型;副词;形容词;介词 |
新课标卷II | 记叙文 | 92 | 不定代词;冠词;形容词;定语从句;副词;动词搭配;连接词;名词;时态;非谓语动词 | |
新课标卷III | 记叙文 | 110 | 介词;动词时态;连词;非谓语动词;动词时态;限定词;定语从句;形容词;形容词最高级;代词 | |
2016年 | 新课标卷I | 记叙文 | 93 | 定语从句;连词;时态;词性;连词;非谓语动词;介词;冠词;代词;副词 |
新课标卷II | 记叙文 | 106 | 特殊结构;情态动词;并列结构;连词;冠词;代词;名词单复数;虚拟语气;时态;代词。 | |
新课标卷III | 说明文 | 108 | 名词复数;形容词最高级;冠词;反身代词;so/such的使用方法;时态;形容词;非谓语动词;介词;状语从句 |
【应试方法】
1、把握"三""四""五",共十二个考试知识点
1. 名词的单复数;2. 介词的误用、多用或少用;3. 动词时态不同。
1. 连词的误用、多用或少用;2. 冠词的误用、多用或少用;3. 词汇辨析;4. 词性误用。
1. 代词;2. 非谓语动词;3. 情态动词;4. 主谓一致;5. 形容词的比较级和最高级。
2、考法
1. 8个改词1个添词1个删词,记住比率是:8:1:1;
2. 每句有0—2个错误;
3. 需要变形的词汇一般是名词、动词、形容词、副词等;
4. 少词一般是添加冠词、介词、连词、不定式的to, 与物主代词;
5. 多词一般是删掉冠词、介词、助动词等。
☞【核心思路】依据考试知识点找错误,又快又准高速度。
3、三个维度
介词、冠词、连词的多用,少用或误用,词性误用,非谓语动词,各类词缀,如否定前缀,名词、形容词、副词后缀;
主谓一致,时态一致,名词的单复数一致,代词的格和数一致;
并列句中两个简单句的关系,因果、转折、选择、并列关系等。
短文改错解题口诀
口诀1、
短文改错有妙计,完整一致看仔细。词法侧重冠名动,形副互换要注意。
分词出现多琢磨,主动被动加语气。全文一处多一词,一处少词关介词。
时态人称要统一,连词使用方法重逻辑。短文改错要做好, 容易见到种类应记牢。
口诀2、
名词爱考数与格,冠词在前"错、多、少";
动词时态和语态,非谓语搭配莫错了;
连代形副错一样,多是故意来混淆;介词多半考搭配,多漏误用想周到;
句法涉及到"一致",从句多考关系词。词法句法均未错,逻辑推理去探寻。
"811" 排列是规律,回读复查敲定稿。
注 1. "一致"包含主谓一致,数、性、格等的一致。
2. 811常指:8处错误, 1处多词,1处少词。
Correction 1(2019·新课标I卷)
假定英语课上老师需要同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I became interesting in playing football thanks to a small accident. One afternoon where I was in primary school, I was walking by the school playground. Suddenly football fell just in front of me but almost hit me. I sTOPped the ball and kicked it hardly back to the playground. To everyone`s surprising, the ball went into the net. All the football player on the playground cheered loudly, say that I had a talent for football. From now on, I started to play my football with classmates after school. I am a good player now.
Correction 2(2019·新课标II卷)
假定英语课上老师需要同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Since I was a kid, I`ve considered different job I would like to do. First, I wanted to be a fireman, whose uniform looked so coolly. Then, when I was in the five grade, I wanted to be a teacher because I liked my English teacher too much. When I studied chemistry high school, I reconsidered mg goal or decided to be a doctor. They were two reasons for the decision. One was that I was amazing at the fact that a sick person could feel much more better after seeing a doctor. And the other is that I wanted to help people in need.
Correction 3(2019·新课标III卷)
假定英语课上老师需要同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I've had many dreams since I was a child. Now my dream is to opens a cafe. Though it may appear simple, it required a lot of ideas and efforts. What I want is not just an ordinarily cafe but a very special one. I want my cafe have a special theme such as like "Tang Dynasty". In the cafe, customers will enjoy yourselves in the historical environment what is created for them. If I succeed in manage one, I will open more. I wish to have a chain of cafes in many different city. Each of my cafes will have a different theme and an unique style.
Correction 4(2018·新课标I卷)
假定英语课上老师需要同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
During my last winter holiday, I went to countryside with my father to visit my grandparents. I find a big change there. The first time I went there, they were living in a small house with dogs, ducks, and another animals. Last winter when I went here again, they had a big separate house to raise dozens of chicken. They also had a small pond which they raised fish. My grandpa said last summer they earned quite a lot by sell the fish. I felt happily that their life had improved. At the end of
our trip, I told my father that I planned to return for every two years, but he agreed.
Correction 5(2018·新课标II卷)
假定英语课上老师需要同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
When I was little, Friday’s night was our family game night. After supper, we would play card games of all sort in the sitting room. As the kid, I loved to watch cartoons, but no matter how many times I asked to watching them, my parents would not to let me. They would say to us that playing card games would help my brain. Still I unwilling to play the games for them sometimes. I didn’t realize how right my parents are until I entered high school. The games my parents taught me where I was a child turned out to be very useful later in my life.
Correction 6(2018·新课标III卷)
假定英语课上老师需要同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文,文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处,每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删改或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
It was Monday morning, and the writing class had just begin. Everyone was silent, wait to see who would be called upon to read his and her paragraph aloud. Some of us were confident and eager take part in the class activity, others were nervous and anxious. I had done myself homework but I was shy. I was afraid that to speak in front of a larger group of people. At that moment, I remembered that my father once said, "The classroom is a place for learning and that include leaning from textbooks, and mistake as well." Immediate, I raised my hand.
Correction 7(2017·新课标I卷)
假定英语课上老师需要同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号,并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者不计分。
In the summer holiday following my eighteen birthday, I took driving lessons. I still remember how hard first day was. Before getting into the car, I thought I had learned the instructor’s orders, so once I started the car, my mind goes blank, I forgot what he had said to me altogether. The instructor kept repeating the word, "Speed up!" "Slow down!" "Turning left!" I was so much nervous that I could hardly tell which direction was left. A few minutes late, the instructor asked me to sTOP the car. It was a relief and I came to a suddenly sTOP just in the middle on the road.
Correction 8(2017·新课标II卷)
假定英语课上老师需要同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处;每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号,并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者不计分。
Mr. and Mrs. Zhang all work in our school. They live far from the school, and it takes them about a hour and a half to go to work every day. In their spare time, they are interesting in planting vegetables in their garden, that is on the roofTOP of their house. They often get up earlier and water the vegetables together. They have also bought for some gardening tools. beside, they often get some useful informations from the internet. When summer came, they will invite their students pick the vegetables!
Correction 9(2017·新课标III卷)
假定英语课上老师需要同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号,并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者不计分。
When I look at this picture of myself. I realize of how fast time flies. I had grown not only physically, and also mentally in the past few years. about one month after this photo was took, I entered my second year of high school and become a new member of the school music club. Around me in picture are the things they were very important in my life at that time: car magazines and musical instruments. I enjoyed studying difference kinds of cars and planes, playing pop music, and collecting the late music albums. This picture often brings back to me many happy memories of your high school days.
Correction1(山东淄博2019届高中三年级部分学校5月阶段性诊断(二模)考试 )
假定英语课上老师需要同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号,并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者不计分。
It can be seen from the picture Mr. Liu,who wears a mask. was walking his dog. Interestingly,his dog which also wears a mask.
In recent year,air pollution has become more and more serious in some areas,which have led to severe consequences. To solve this problem,firstly of all,we should raise the public awareness of protecting the environment. Secondly,the government ought to punish the illegal acts as polluting the environment severe. Thirdly,we must do our best to protecting the environment in our daily life. only in this way can human beings and animals share a pleasant planet or live a happy life.
Correction 2(安徽师范大学附属中学2019届高中三年级5月考试前适应性测试)
假定英语课上老师需要同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号,并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者不计分。
My mom and dad are great cooks, but I always enjoy staying at home and having delicious food. I remembered when I was about six, all the kids in my neighborhood wanted hamburgers and chips, but some didn't have money to buy it. So my father tried to make some on the weekend and asked them eat at my home for the free. The kids were very happier. It helped me make lots of friend. Now I often cooking for my parents, and they like my dishes, either. It's really relaxing to sit around a table for my parents, eating and talking together.
Correction 3(湖北黄冈2019届高中三年级模拟)
假定英语课上英语老师需要同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Ms Smith,
I’m writing to ask whether you could do me favor. I’ve just finished an essay naming “Differences between traditional Chinese and Western festivals”, so I’m not sure whether it is well written. To be honestly, I’m not that familiar with some traditional Western festivals. That’s because I’m turning to you for help. I’d appreciate it if you could spare some time to look into my essay for possible mistakes and polish them. Also, I’m looking forward to your valuable advices. My essay has been sending to you along with this email. I hope it won’t cause you too much more trouble.
Thank you in advance.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Correction 4
假定英语课上老师需要同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处;每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号,并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者不计分。
As my mother and father were always busy working, so I was often at home by myself. I felt boring all the time and I felt sorry for myself. One day, in my way home from school, I saw a person living in the park. He was wearing dirty but worn-out clothes. He gave me a big smile when he saw me. He looked if he was the happiest man in the world. Looked at him, I realized how luckily I really was. I have enough food to eat and enough clothes to wear and I had hard-working parents who really cared about him. I realized what grateful I was to my parents for all that I had.
Correction 5
假定英语课上老师需要同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处;每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号,并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者不计分。
once there was a tale tell of a spider with the name Anansi. He wondered what to be more intelligent. He went around the village to collect for wisdom with a basket. Soon his basket was full. To hide it on the TOP of the tree with the basket tied to the front part of his body, he found hard to climb the tree. Then her youngest son walked by, “Why not carry a basket on your back instead?” Following his advice, Anansi climbed the tree easily, and he wasn’t happy. “I have collected so many wisdom, but my baby son is still wise than me. Take back your wisdom!” He throw the basket of wisdom into the air. And that’s how wisdom went all over the world.
Correction 1
假定英语课上老师需要同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号 ,并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线 划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者不计分。
When talked about my dream. I recalled my childhood, which I started learning to sing. At that time it was my interest led me to sing. Hard although I learned, I was happy then. And with time going on, I have gradually realized sing is my whole life. I like it or enjoy it. I want to stand on an even big stage to sing where not only will my dream be come true but also I can send my beautiful song to all the audience. I want to transfer happy and encouragement to the audience by singing, letting us cheer up.
Correction 2
假定英语课上老师需要同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号 ,并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线 划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者不计分。
I was riding in a taxi to the bus station but from there I was supposed to taking a bus to New York City. It was going to be long journey. I had been packed some chocolates in my suitcase to eat in the way. When the ride was over, I paid the driver the due amount and gave him a tip. He got my suitcase out. I took them and started walking away. However, I realized that it was one of the opportunity to perform an act of kindness. I want to give away all the chocolates to the driver. After all, he had served me even though it was just his job. I gave them away and saw the brightly smile light up his face, what made me feel my heart filled with happiness.
Correction 3
假定英语课上老师需要同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号 ,并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线 划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者不计分。
I can still remember I was once asked to make speech before the whole class at the age of 9. You can imagine how shy I was when I thought of that with so many eyes fixed to me. I had no more choice but to prepare for it, though. The hardest part was my oral presentation from my memory, for reading from the paper wasn’t allowing. The real moment began before I stood on the platform with my legs trembling or my mind blank. But my listeners were waiting patient. Gradually, I found me back, giving my speech at last. After what seemed to be a long time, I heard all the listeners applauding loudly. Ever since then, my fear of speak before a big audience had disappeared. Actually, now I’ve become a great speaker!
Correction 4
假定英语课上老师需要同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号 ,并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线 划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者不计分。
Which is known to all, nowadays the Internet is playing more and more important part in our daily life. In it, we can not only read news at home and abroad but also get so much information as possible. We are often send e-mails to our classmates. We can make telephone call to our families as well as our friends. However, we can go to school on the net, read different kinds of books and even teach myself English. We can also enjoy music, watching sports and play computer games on the net. We could do shopping even without leaving our homes.
Correction 5
假定英语课上老师需要同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号 ,并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线 划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者不计分。
On the Earth Day, my classmates and I decided to do everything for our school. We were divided into three group. The first group picked up rubbish and put it in plastic bags. The second group painted the walls of the classrooms, where had been so dirty. The third group planted many trees in the courtyard under our teachers’ help. I helped dig the holes on the ground, put the trees in the holes, fill the holes with soil. Later on, we water the trees. It was a tired day but we felt happily. Let’s devote ourselves to protect our earth!